Kia ora Inka
I liked reading this news report because you used some words that are used in news reports like studies show, and you gave the description of mr johnson which I haven’t seen other people do and this was like an actual news report. Maybe next time make the image a little bigger so its easier to see the story and so more people can enjoy it.
From Amrin
Kia ora Inka
I liked reading this news report because you used some words that are used in news reports like studies show, and you gave the description of mr johnson which I haven’t seen other people do and this was like an actual news report. Maybe next time make the image a little bigger so its easier to see the story and so more people can enjoy it.
From Amrin
Idk sis cuz like maybe you could try a lil harder on ur eye tests so that you could see <3
-Your amazing sister